The 2026 Novel Writing Challenge: My Task #128

Yup as the task said, I am working on editing my chapter 2. I always find this a little more difficult than chapter one actually. I think I spend so much time thinking about chapter one before I start writing that when I go back to edit it I have fewer edits to make to it. The I hit chapter two and wonder if someone managed to vacuum out the commas when i wasn’t looking.